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by Seshtah Fri Oct 19, 2007 6:37 am
I wrote a poem! (for me this is a very strange thing) ...ok, ok, ok. So it was an English asignment sheesh. But still, my friends at school (well most of 'em anyways) have threatened to do horrible things to me if I didn't attempt to publish it somewhere. Actually, Amy threatened to throw me into the school dumpster then sit on the lids so I couldn't get out. That wouldn't be so bad but she said she'd burn all my manga and whatever books I had in my backpack at that moment then force me to watch after she let me out. *shudders*She's cruel that way but I still luves her XD
Anyways, what do you guys think about it?
Anyways, what do you guys think about it?
Forgotten One
In the great port of Ariel
of high white walls and jingling bells.
With sea salt air and much to see,
much too busy to simply be.
Yet further down on quiet streets,
there is a place where the goddess sleeps.
Her statue broken and flowers dead,
worshipers scattered to others instead.
A ragged girl pauses at altar’s edge
as she looks around, then quietly said:
They’ve all forgotten but I have not
the many things that you have taught.
She then turned away with a heavy sigh
as the heavens opened, making the statue to cry.
The rain covered all in a blanket of gloom
a woven grey cloth from a heavenly loom.
In the great port of Ariel
of high white walls and jingling bells.
With sea salt air and much to see,
much too busy to simply be.
Yet further down on quiet streets,
there is a place where the goddess sleeps.
Her statue broken and flowers dead,
worshipers scattered to others instead.
A ragged girl pauses at altar’s edge
as she looks around, then quietly said:
They’ve all forgotten but I have not
the many things that you have taught.
She then turned away with a heavy sigh
as the heavens opened, making the statue to cry.
The rain covered all in a blanket of gloom
a woven grey cloth from a heavenly loom.
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Re: *gaspies*
by Nosferatu_Shinigami Fri Oct 19, 2007 10:21 pm
Wow, this is great! Kind of depressing, but still good. 
And your friend is evil
I wrote some poems myself, but I don't think I published them anywhere. Neither the polish, or the english ones
And your friend is evil
I wrote some poems myself, but I don't think I published them anywhere. Neither the polish, or the english ones
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Re: *gaspies*
by Seshtah Sun Oct 21, 2007 9:03 am
Thankies ^^
yeah she is, she was laughing the entire time she told me...
post 'em post 'em!!!
yeah she is, she was laughing the entire time she told me...
post 'em post 'em!!!
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Re: *gaspies*
by Nosferatu_Shinigami Sun Oct 21, 2007 5:45 pm
Who knows... I just might Sesh... I just might But they're not that good... ^^;
But they're not that good... ^^;
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